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Our table of four
feels especially lonely tonight
as we all sneak a glance at the empty chair
that has not been used in two years.

Dust has gathered upon the chair
and books have been piled on top of it.
No one sits in the chair.
It just does not feel right.

I try very hard not to cry.
My mother has already sobbed during dinner
and my sister and I looked at the ground with a pained look
at hearing our mother's cries.

After dinner I walk out into the dark night.
The air is cold, but I don't mind.
My hands are in my pockets
and my hood covers my saddened face.

I walk to my old elementary school park
and sit on the old creaky swing.
Tears fill my eyes and I try to hold them back.
My hands begin to turn red from my tight grip on the chains.

The tears finally spill out of my eyes
and I look up to the clear black sky.
The stars are shining brightly
and I almost feel a bit of relief looking up at the sky.

I smile slightly and begin to sing
the "Happy Birthday" song to my dad.
The stars of the sky looked like they were almost watching over me,
just like my dad had watched over my family when he was alive.

"Dad, I miss you.
Thank you for everything.
I love you so much.
Happy birthday."

I slowly rise from the swing
and begin the chilly walk home.
I again look up to the stars
and smile to the clear night sky.

"Thank you Dad, for everything
and happy birthday."
Today is my dad's birthday. He would have been 53. This is a poem in his memory, hope you enjoy.
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eLsClone Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012   Artist
My Father is gone.
He died drinking and driving.
It was new years eve.
it was a head on collision.
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karezuzusan Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so sorry that happened to you...I wish there was someway I could help :huggle:
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rothus66 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow very powerful and charged with he must have been a great man to inspire such a great poem.
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karezuzusan Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
He was :) Thank you so much for the kind words and the fave :)
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LVYara Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really, have no words to this.
Is so Beautiful!
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:iconkarezuzusan:
karezuzusan Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Gracias mi amiga :) That means so much :hug:
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LVYara Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You are welcome!
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Student Writer
How very touching. You did such a good job.
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karezuzusan Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much :huggle:
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Student Writer
Welcome. :hug:
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ThatCanonKid Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Student Writer
I nearly, shed a tear. :heart: :hug:
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:iconkarezuzusan:
karezuzusan Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for the comment :huggle:
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ThatCanonKid Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Student Writer
No problem, I'm sorry about your loss. :hug: x
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karezuzusan Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :huggle:
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BeTheMockingjay23 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is just amazing. I love my father very much, and for me, well, for most of my life, he was my role model even though he was away EVERYDAY. :heart: You... made this so amazing. :hug:
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karezuzusan Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Omg thank you so much!! Reading your comment made me so happy I'm glad you enjoyed it!! :huggle:
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BeTheMockingjay23 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem! Really, thank YOU! I've looked at him quite horribly at times, because he's screamed at my mom sometimes, but not anymore, and i actually wanted to be alone. This thing made me realize my dad is very important. I'm sorry for your dad's loss. :hug: The fact of losing my dad is very hard for me, considering i'm daddy's girl. I just love this poem to pieces. :heart: I hope your father is very proud of you!
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karezuzusan Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I was a daddy's girl too!! And oh believe me I was very mad at my father sometimes, but he was so important to me and I miss him so much. Thank you for your kind words!! I hope he is proud of me too :) Thank you for sharing this comment, it makes me so happy that you enjoyed it so much :) :heart:
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BeTheMockingjay23 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:) Daddy's girls, unite! :D Yes, I pretty much have been somewhat rebellious to him. But i love my dad. No problem, I pretty much think I am corny! :XD:
Yes, he is very proud of you, for stating this poem for him. I enjoyed it to the point of no return. Kudos to you :)
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karezuzusan Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wooo yesss daddy's girls unite :D And no you are fine haah XD I can tell you really love your dad which is awesome :heart: Thank you so much for the watch and points also :D You have been so kind :D
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BeTheMockingjay23 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:) :iconohyeahplz:
Hehe, you too. :hug:
Oh, yes. I love my daddy. :heart:
No problem, really, :)
I just had dinner with him, and we joked about him almost drinking clorox lol. :XD:
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karezuzusan Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
haha oh geez XD That makes me happy and Im glad you are too haha :)
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MetalgearTwilight01 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
nice job and I have no other words for how great this is
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karezuzusan Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much :huggle: And thanks for the fave!
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MetalgearTwilight01 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
your welcome
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