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Ordinary Day

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It was just another ordinary day.
The sky was clear.
The sun was bright.
The leaves were blowing slightly.
I suddenly heard a heavy knock on the door.
Confusion ran through my head.
I carefully walked towards the door.
Slowly.
Before I even arrived the door slammed opened.
Three shadows came intothe house.
They came around me.
Mocking me.
Taunting me.
Demeaning me.
I cried out for help, but no one heard my cries.
Denial.
Deception.
Death.
Clawing into my soul.
Changing who I was.
Tears streamed down my face.
I gently rubbed my tears and gasped at what I saw.
Red tears.
Blood.
It shimmered brightly in the sunlight.
I screamed for the shadows to stop.
But they would not leave me alone.
I ran outside into the sunlight.
But the sun had set on this day.
My eyes widened.
My tears grew even stronger.
I couldn't breathe.
My life as I knew it was gone.
And it had all started out as an ordinary day.
A poem describing how I felt they day my dad died. My dad died suddenly of a heart attack and I miss him everyday.....
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MidnightRaven6's avatar
the way you expressed your feelings here is really great, and touching.
i felt close to the same way when my mother died. my mom was my best friend and it was so hard losing her. she quit breathing and went into cardiac arrest. we spent about 5 days in the hospital and were told on the fifth day that she wasnt coming back. i personally think those days in the hospital helped to lessen the shock for me.