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It was just another ordinary day.
The sky was clear.
The sun was bright.
The leaves were blowing slightly.
I suddenly heard a heavy knock on the door.
Confusion ran through my head.
I carefully walked towards the door.
Slowly.
Before I even arrived the door slammed opened.
Three shadows came intothe house.
They came around me.
Mocking me.
Taunting me.
Demeaning me.
I cried out for help, but no one heard my cries.
Denial.
Deception.
Death.
Clawing into my soul.
Changing who I was.
Tears streamed down my face.
I gently rubbed my tears and gasped at what I saw.
Red tears.
Blood.
It shimmered brightly in the sunlight.
I screamed for the shadows to stop.
But they would not leave me alone.
I ran outside into the sunlight.
But the sun had set on this day.
My eyes widened.
My tears grew even stronger.
I couldn't breathe.
My life as I knew it was gone.
And it had all started out as an ordinary day.
The sky was clear.
The sun was bright.
The leaves were blowing slightly.
I suddenly heard a heavy knock on the door.
Confusion ran through my head.
I carefully walked towards the door.
Slowly.
Before I even arrived the door slammed opened.
Three shadows came intothe house.
They came around me.
Mocking me.
Taunting me.
Demeaning me.
I cried out for help, but no one heard my cries.
Denial.
Deception.
Death.
Clawing into my soul.
Changing who I was.
Tears streamed down my face.
I gently rubbed my tears and gasped at what I saw.
Red tears.
Blood.
It shimmered brightly in the sunlight.
I screamed for the shadows to stop.
But they would not leave me alone.
I ran outside into the sunlight.
But the sun had set on this day.
My eyes widened.
My tears grew even stronger.
I couldn't breathe.
My life as I knew it was gone.
And it had all started out as an ordinary day.
Literature
They Lied
They said I'd have the time of my life
I was bored
They said that i would make heaps of friends
I was alone
They said that it would be fun
It wasn't
They said that I would have a boyfriend
No one asked me out
They said that the teachers would control the class
They didn't
They said that counseling would help me
It made me worse
They said that I would succeed
i failed
Literature
Forgotten
Familiar faces all around,
But all that I can do is frown
Because they all just pass me by
Without a single passing "hi."
To make matters worse, everyone is in a clique
And I am never their first pick;
Somehow I'm always pushed aside
And always left aloneto die.
I never know what there is to do
So I sit here like a forgotten shoe.
I'm left behind once again,
Left alone to rot in my own sin.
So I'll sit here under my favorite tree,
And write my heartbroken poetry.
Literature
Depression,what is depression?
Depression,what is depression?Its a ball in chain on your neck and throat as you walk-talk-breath and wake,that moves with you like the shadow that you see and feel,like the sounds you hear,day and night,from dusk till dawn.Depression,what is depression?Its a constant state of truth and dare,of wanting more but getting less,its the cloud filled with the sorrow of childrens tears,shattering souls thats made of steel.Depression,what is depression?Its the end of dreams and the start of none,the dark void inside thats never filled,its the soul that never found oneself.Depression,what is depression?
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A poem describing how I felt they day my dad died. My dad died suddenly of a heart attack and I miss him everyday.....
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the way you expressed your feelings here is really great, and touching.
i felt close to the same way when my mother died. my mom was my best friend and it was so hard losing her. she quit breathing and went into cardiac arrest. we spent about 5 days in the hospital and were told on the fifth day that she wasnt coming back. i personally think those days in the hospital helped to lessen the shock for me.
i felt close to the same way when my mother died. my mom was my best friend and it was so hard losing her. she quit breathing and went into cardiac arrest. we spent about 5 days in the hospital and were told on the fifth day that she wasnt coming back. i personally think those days in the hospital helped to lessen the shock for me.